Sunday, February 10, 2013
personal entry: Bella's Birthday!
My little sister Bella's birthday is today and she's turning 1!!! I can't believe this year went by so fast. I thought it would go by slower but instead went really fast. She's grown in so many healthy ways. She learned to crawl, smile, patty cake, and even almost walk. She grows faster every minute. We're making this birthday a special one because she only turns 1 once. We have everything pink, from table covers to pink hats. She even has her own little cake. Happy Birthday Bella!
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Happy Birthday, little one! If you(Bella)ever come back and read this, I hope you take good care of your older sister. I can tell she loves you very much.
ReplyDeleteKrystin--You are starting to develop your content more. Good. Keep going. You still have room to expand. The area you need to work on is making sure your entry is important to your reader. So with this entry about Bella's 1st birthday for example, is nice for a personal blog, but is not taken to a level that would interest people that do not know you/your family. For instance, you could add discussion about rapidly passing time, the beauty of youth and innocence, the impact a baby/toddler has on life/world view, etc. These are more general topics that your audience can connect to.
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